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So I was feeling creative earlier today and I wrote this song. It's sort of sloppy but I wanted to get a recording of my idea for a song. Maybe with some sax in final version?

Drum Tracks and Bass Line and Organ Recorded in Garage band by me.
Guitar tracks were played Rveverend Six Gun>Hoof Reaper>Vox VT40+. I really only used the hoof reaper for the heavier rhythm guitar and solos. Also used clean tone of amp.

Here's the track! I plan to revise and polish the lead and make the rhythm louder for a smoother demo.

[soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/ryan-hargis-2/my-song-7[/soundcloud]

Any tips on recording would help a lot, I have to use my phone since I'm at college right now.
Musical tips also are appreciated, but lets try to keep it civil?

Also, you might want to put on headphones so you can really hear the bass track!

So I have a slightly cleaned up version of the song on my soundcloud now. I tweaked EQ a little. Guitar is still a bit sloppy though.

Please tell me what you think!

Much better recording; in the process of getting the saxophone in

[soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/ryan-hargis-2/bluesy-rock-jam-clean-version[/soundcloud]